Talk:Neon/@comment-25526836-20150516180956




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Welcome to yet another review. Today, we are on the subject of the character Neon the Spelunker, developed by Neon the Spelunker. #loop

So, design. Yes, it's yet another Kirby-esque appearance but you gave him a nice looking fedora and his weapon is a characteristic of himself that separates himself from others. He's really lovable and shows some effort from being a generic Popopo lookalike. So, you pass in this field.

Information is pretty well said. The introduction paragraph is a bit short but everything else is filled out neatly in the infobox. There isn't much to him, making him one of a simple type, but this is fine to me because you did it well.

Abilities stand out from other characters on this wiki. The neonlight stuff is cool and characterizes him and brings some depth to him. He sort of reminds me of a cowboy with the whip, and as I like cowboys that's pretty cool honestly.

His personality is well written, just like with abilities it characterizes him and although it's somewhat generic it's done right.

This review is incomplete due to a lack of relationship fill outs and backstory, but once those are done I can give a more complete review of the character. Neon is so far a really great character that I hope to see expanded on. Superb, it should be said.