Talk:White/@comment-25526836-20150516172535




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I'm not going to follow the review style I gave Adil, but I'm going to sum up everything in a few paragraphs and place the ratings all at the end.

Design? I get that the series has a lot of recolors, but White definitely does not stand out. It's more or less Kirby with a white hue and a Boom Stick. That's not the actual character in terms of personality and shit but I felt like the design was rather lazily done and does not stand up well towards various other recolors in the series. I'm sorry but I think that I'm giving you the grey mark on this one.

Relationships are okay, to say the least. They're accurate and give just enough to be able to be seen as relationships. Most articles should follow the standards that this article has for relationships.

Information is probably the best thing on this article. The article is well organized, has a reader catching introduction, gives out who the character is in a small summary, and the infobox is well done.

Backstory is really generic sounding, there isn't that much effort placed into it, but it fits with the character and the backdrop of the series'  plotline so you're getting the passing mark for it. Even if it's cliche, that doesn't mean its bad.

Abilities don't impress me. Fuck, we know he's able to use fire, but in what ways does he control fire? You don't really specify. Also he's of the mirror element but we don't see anything about how he uses it on the page. ??  Also, he's able to master any weapon. I don't know about anyone else but this sounds op as fuck.

Personality is really boring and really worth skipping as it feels like the personality of a generic hero. Yes he's the main protagonist but the personality is boring. I really can't excuse myself to give you a passing mark here.

So, White is an okay character in my eyes. He feels very generic in my opinion however and compared to at least half the characters in the series he's really worth skipping. Sorry buddy.