Talk:Tommy/@comment-25526836-20150516193405




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Welcome to the review of Thomas Jeffers-erm, Tommy and Lixo.

Design. The green lines thing is surprisingly not commonly seen but the design doesn't really...appeal to me.

Information is plentiful and the article is organized. Summary paragraph is good and the infobox is mostly filled.

Backstory is a bit generic but I kind of like it, especially considering the fact that Tommy's best friend is a piece of Dark Matter. Now Lixo isn't the only friendly Dark Matter but I still like this. Passing mark.

Abilities don't stand out much because Lixo reminds me a lot of Gooey but they're still interesting abilities...so they get a passing mark.

I don't really like his personality that much, it reminds me of Sonic too much and it seems really uhh like a turnback on the article because Sonic's character traits are awful. No offense.

This review is incomplete due to a lack of relationship fill outs, but once those are done I can give a more complete review of the character. Tommy and Lixo are pretty decent.